Very nice. I especially liked the bits of dirty humor, as I found them appropriate for Alexander and Hephaistion (they are soldiers, after all). One thing though: I found it strange that Alexander would call Bagoas "Darius' old pet." I mean, he's already slept with him, so even if he wouldn't call him by name, I'd think at least "the boy" or something similar. It's not like Hephaistion wouldn't know who he meant. Well, that's just my take on it; feel free to disagree.
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Date: 2004-10-01 10:29 am (UTC)